I'd have to see a post to fully judge. I doubt it's too bad. xD I tend to really talk a lot about what my characters are doing because I guess I always fantasize coming back and drawing the scene and in order to do that I need to know specifics. I try not to repeat in my posts though because it becomes really noticeable when I read it out loud, so maybe focus on not clustering your gazes too close together? ? ? Again, going blind at this. xP I'll try to put together a pile of different ways to say looking somewhere maybe give some ideas on other ways you can write it so you won't feel frustrated with it?

Her eyes looked this way.
Her gaze moved towards.
The sight of the door opening drew her attention.
The hues of her eyes settled onto this object.

That's the best I can think of. OTL; Sorry if none of this helps. BUT just know that I tried! -bow bow-

LMAOO thank u guys for the replies but let me try rephrasing: what are ways i can imply my character is looking at something without mentioning anything to do with attention / eyes / gazes.

"The sound of a pan hitting the counter captured Garfield's attention. It was lasagna!"
"Garfield's stomach rumbled. John had left lasagna on the counter."
so these r really close to what i mean. b/c you can assume garfield is looking at that there spicy lasagna even tho u haven't said he's looking right at it.

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