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The bridge adjoining the castle's two main bodies spans the tributary that becomes the Great Lake. After waking and dressing in morning's muted silence, Noel heads there to smoke. He learned quickly that it's a nice place to do so, and who would be up at five in the morning to catch him?

It's cold as a witch's tit once he arrives, but home's cold too. With dry palms Noel covers the cigarette's end against a walking breeze to let it catch. It crackles like good bread. The sun teases the horizon, the sky dark still but lightening.

a starter i did for someone today! im trying to hone a sort of vestigial scene setting that ive seen employed by certain authors, and also learning to vary densely packed sentences with lighter ones (that still serve purpose), AND having the metaphor/writing style fit the character. eg, none of my other characters on this site would ever use the phrase "cold as a witch's tit" in their posts except noel haha
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ive been a site monogamist for a while now out of necessity, but now that i have a lil more time on my hands the prospect of having 1 character on like 6 different sites is kinda tempting. no site should be safe from my bouquet of incompetencies
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i dug this up from a thread i was in about a year ago cause i miss this char and was reading her old threads (shes retired now)

Ia flutters into consciousness as sheโ€™s lowered gently onto the grass. The noise confounds her without penetrating her understanding: a roar wrenches the very air and she shivers, but she doesnโ€™t scream.

โ€œโ€”if you have to.โ€

Ia attempts to hoist herself upward on her left arm. Immediate pain; she whimpers. Body leadened, she shifts over slowly and levers into a seated position with her right.

Wind whispers over the grass. Shouts are swallowed by the sky. Students scream and irritate the faint ringing she hears. Thereโ€™s a white sheet in the middle of the grass, a little ways beyond. Ia peers blearily at it. What an odd thing to see in the middle of the grass.

for context: there was a huge accident involving a dragon and a lot of students and she doesnt know her dead fiance is under the white sheet. she learns he died later but she'll never make the connection that that was him!!
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this isnt rly answering the question so much as expounding on the importance of character consistency but i thought it could be fun/useful to slide in regardless. straight from the huss's lips:



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Also if your character is generally quiet and anti-social don't put them in a social thread with another quiet, anti-social character. You'll be forced to break their character to,, as you said,, adapt.

u can actually do this and stick to ur guns but prepare to thread at least 5 posts of awkward silence each btwn u and ur partner before ur characters say anything. not speaking from personal experience of anything

(it was kinda funny actually, but also ur characters dont have to speak for things to happen)
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idk what to say when people bring up every aspect of their personal lives in the discord i'm not talking about like. bringing up your personal experiences when they're tangentially related to the topic at hand i'm talking about periodic "i'm getting water" "i'm brushing my hair" "i'm eating strawberries" "i'm adjusting my shirt sleeves" every actual ten minutes in a quiet chat like . i. thank you for telling me ig?

sorry but i think this is funny as fuck and im definitely gonna start doing it now LMAOOO "im feeling thirsty besties ! gonna get a drink" suddenly im a whole twitch streamer
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also dark academia site,,,, pls,,,,

me and my slimes had this dark academia site premise on the backburner for so long you have no idea. straight outta the secret history/dead poets society/kill your darlings with a hint of lovecraft it was soooooooo sexy

rip though we have negative time to run a mf site
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the urge to reinvent my entire self is overwhelming, it is coming soon- i need to embrace of a new beginning something full of CHANGE aHHHHHHH

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