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girl help (ignore my last post) im dying and i need a good idol rp site to revive me
girl help im dying and i need a medieval euro fantasy site w humans only to revive me
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i am once again asking

- crime rp with like centralized location in a single city and less factions but more members in each
- ouran rp. self explanatory. rich people mischief
- entertainment rp but with consequences. please let me punch someone and be exiled out of the acting industry and have people lose fans because of dating scandals like Give Me Some Realism!!!!!!!!! instead of letting everything be sanitized and cookie cutter cute
- historical fantasy no stats only 1 species
last edit on Jun 16, 2022 2:04:06 GMT by lovelorn
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shamefully i do not proofread my rp posts but i DO proofread rp apps and fics that i write (only if freeform apps, because otherwise form apps don't tend to give me a lot to edit). its a multistep process depending on how good i care about it being that starts with, of course, actually finishing the piece

immediately after i go in and skim the piece and fix the obvious things like spelling, grammar, typos etc. if i see potential edits that can be made while i do this i do them 2 but then like i dont go out of my way 2 find things i can improve, just do them where i see them.

after that i go in and read the whole thing again and start from the beginning to the end to study the flow like are the transitions clean enough? is one part of the overall piece longer than the rest? i edit for flow and pacing, adding and removing scenes as necessary

after that i go in and change things for tone, phrasing, flow, etc. do i overuse this word, is there a better metaphor, wouldn't this part sound better if i rephrased it, all of that. and then after these i submit

for posts in general though i dont tend to proofread and only do that if there's a lot happening/combat so i can just make sure i responded to everything and in order if so, and smooth out typos & other errors if i catch them mid writing
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- post count being visible on a character's profile. i like to see
- character intro channels on the discord where you ONLY post character introductions (aka like a little blurb about them/link) and dont get to bump them. good way to integrate new members without their links being lost to the abyss of everyone talking in the plotting channel
- member directory/claims being mandatory/required in order to have your character sorted. i hate people not doing these it drives me insane
- forum games in the ooc section of a forum. idc if you have discord all of you are playing hot or not, fe quotes, gacha card mockups.
- epithets in the apps. bonus points if rpers actually use them like they are There for a reason !!! call my character sunreaper or whatever. embrace the edge
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i need 2 stop playing gacha not because i'm spending money because i'm firmly f2p but i'm playing dislyte alchemy stars (sort of but im on and off), genshin, and i want to play honkai star rail + want to get back into epic seven. what am i but a fool
last edit on Jun 4, 2022 23:52:53 GMT by lovelorn
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pulled both azure and reinhardt (and not pictured here, but also paloma!!) within 50 pulls on reinhardt's banner! honestly didn't know beth was coming back otherwise i would have saved but otherwise not bad considering i went on break from alchemy stars during my finals and didnt save for the anniversary LOLLLL but theres no way im pulling beth with 3000 currency </3 pretty happy still considering azure, reinhardt, and paloma are all new units for me

last edit on Jun 4, 2022 23:49:32 GMT by lovelorn