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This wasn't always the case, but Jigglypuff. Idk why, but I love that dramatic little pink puff. What a star.

(Somehow I'm on a Pokรฉmon forum and I literally have never used it, though.)

ETA: Umbreon is also bae. And Sunkern has become a new favorite due to shenanigans.
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Oh man. I have so many.

-I like connecting my sentences together so that they flow. I don't know how else to explain it, but it's important to me that they build on one another and have a pleasing rhythm. It's the thing I try to look for most when I'm editing: does this sentence feel out of place? Does it belong with all the others, or does it sound like it's sticking out?

-Long paragraph followed by separate, standalone sentence is my bread-and-butter.

-I love semicolons, colons, and emdashes. Especially semicolons. God. Why do I love semicolons so much. I try to ration myself, lmao.

-Sentence fragments that build on a previous statement for dramatic emphasis.

-I love, love, love a good anaphora moment.

-"Perhaps" has entered my vocabulary a lot with my current girl. She's also indirect as hell, which is honestly fun, because I get to bounce a lot of questions back to other characters. Also lets me do a lot of calculating internal dialogue, which then gives more weight to the words she ultimately says aloud. (Hopefully.)
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Sensory language is a powerful tool. How are you using all the senses? What can you smell, taste, see, hear, touch?

What time is it? Daytime? Nighttime? Are you in an urban setting where the streetlamps have all turned on at night? Are you in the countryside where you can see all the morning dew glittering at sunrise?

Are there other people in the area? If so, what are they doing? Is there traffic? Is there animal or plant life?

Are you indoors? How well-lit is it? What's the personality of the dรฉcor? What's the view outside the window?

When your character takes actions, they are engaging with the world described above. You don't have to describe the answer to every question, but knowing it can help inform your writing with anchoring details. You can actually set the 'scene' in as few as two sentences to get an image across. You can do a lot with a little!

A helpful method I've found for writing in-depth descriptions -- such as people, rooms, or objects, or clothing -- is to begin with a broad description, then zoom in with details. So in a room, for example, I might start with a broad descriptor ("It was a quaint little living room.") then describing the way it looks in a more detailed way ("A patched, faded couch sat beneath the light of an open window, while beside it sat a wooden bookshelf filled to bursting with well-thumbed novels.").

Reading helps, as mentioned above. I've actually found poetry very inspirational from a descriptive-writing perspective, as well as reading screenplays, which have to describe settings and costumes in great detail.
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Expectations are the thief of joy. The reward of roleplay is in the writing of the roleplay itself.

The sooner you drop expectations for specific outcomes in your roleplay, the more you can be pleasantly surprised by where your stories lead you instead.