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Fantasy Site Review written Mar 21, 2019 4:47:36 GMT
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Okay, so I did a small review... I really think the only thing really holding you back would be the amount of information. I love to read lore when it comes to sites, as they help a person understand how the world works. It, however, seems that in the process of making your lore you kinda went really far and bit overboard. I'm not saying that it's bad that anyone won't want to read it but it seems as if it's just a wall of text, it's not bad and does help the world become more than that it is. I, however, think that it maybe could be reduced a bit.

I say this because I used to do this exact thing, where I would over-explain things that could be really simplified, I know it's hard when you start a site from scratch and it's just yourself. I'm not saying change the information, just find a way to make a reduction and more of an engaging read that will pull someone into wanting more. I would say look at how games such as World of Warcraft, Path of Excel, Lord of the Rings, D&D. They all never really give all the background info at the start but give enough to captivate a person. They then explain the story through a quest or storylines and other means, it's kinda okay to leave the world and city shrouded.

When I wake up in the morning, I will read some more and look around. I also can't seem to find a simple short premise for the site.
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Post a Random Thought written Jan 28, 2019 5:31:15 GMT
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Jan 28, 2019 4:19:22 GMT said:
Coding pre-mades for the first time in, like, an eternity. It's fun. Would be more fun if there wasn't stuff I could be spending my time better working on. *sweats profusely*


Making those pre-mades can be hard just don't and play video games = )